October Girl

(Lexy) I was awaking I think.... My head rolled to one side I felt safe.... (for once). I knew I was in someones arms... but who? I tried to force ...

(Lexy) My head hurt my wings ached. I needed to find someone. I needed help I just lay limply on the ground feeling defeat. Glass had shattered into my arm ...

Hey, Amanda... I'm Max welcome to YWS by the way! If you need any help go ahead and PM me. I'd love to help you with anything. :D -Max

(Lexy) I took a breath, I wasn't angry that they had rescued me I was quiet grateful. I knew the white coats would soon find the others and I couldn't ...

(I know I'm writing a little too much but I'm really bored) LEXY I opened my blue eyes as I looked down and saw one of the white jackets on ...

I closed my eyes as I felt people coming down the hallway I knew they were just going to experment but I felt so wound-up about it. When the door ...

I laid on top of the table with my hands and feet straped in. I felt my throat closing up whatever they were going to do to me it was ...

Name:Lexy Age:14 characteristics:once she gets a bruise it's there forever personality:She always has a smart remark. Speaks her mind even when she should just keep her mouth shut. She's up ...

ha yha ha ha ha ... I don't get it but since your my friend I'll give you a 10/10 :wink:

My old username was Insomniac and I am called Max and yes I'm a girl so I now have changed my username to October Girl but still am called Max.. ...

I can't. Two words that downed my world. The words you refuse to hear. I can't. Is what brings me these tears. I can't. Is what fills me with this ...

I think it's cute Keek 10/10

Way to go dude, I like the idea it's very catchy. It flowed together nicely and the paragraphs look alright. So far I didn't see any misspelled words or gramer ...

Aw! Ginger!!! I love it!!! :D

Yeah, sorry but Goth Girl is right, the ending didn't fit very well. But if you expanded it a little I think it would be alot better. You didn't force ...